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sentence structuring

sentence phrasing

     

praveena

4:57 am on Feb 14, 2004 (gmt 0)

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"On submission of the claim by the user, he will be intimated about the success or otherwise of the result."

- Can somebody say if the sentence is correctly structured.

- does "or otherwise" come together as a pharse?

4:04 pm on Feb 14, 2004 (gmt 0)

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Might want to ask this in the Content & Copywriting Forum [webmasterworld.com]
12:09 am on Feb 15, 2004 (gmt 0)

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Seems a bit wordy to me:

Why not: Each claim will be responded to in a timely manner.

or

You can expect a timely response to each claim.