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to me this looks like you would have more chance for success. If you sold art you could do this
Oil painting, contemporary, sculptures, art, buy art, original art, etc
If you put it in a sentence form you would waste precious space with words such as "and" and fillers to make a senetnce.
Can someone help?
In fact, I often write a meta description tag in much the same way I write copy for an Overture ad. And that means getting the best parts into the first 60 characters, because it may well show up in truncated form here and there around the web.
I have seen enormous shifts in ranking from simply updating the title, description and image alt tags. This is often overlooked, and also companies usually include their name in the title, which unless their company name contains key words or phrases, doesn't really do much good.
I'll have to respectfully disagree with that comment. There can be all sorts of very good reasons to keep non-kw-oriented company name in page titles. In fact, I generally advise it. Reasons range from straight SEO concerns, to click thru/ROI, to marketing/branding advantages, IMHO.