Yahoo description

Which is the better one?

[Helpmebe1]

A) Digitalmans Digital Camera Accessories - we offer aftermarket and original accessories for name brand digital cameras.

or

B)Digitalmans Digital Camera Accessories - we offer batteries, multi media cards and other accessories for your digital camera.

We have the top listing as it is and show great for the digital camera accessories phrase but would like to show for digital camera batteries, digital camera cards without wrecking our key term digital camera supplies. What do you all think is best?

[Bradley]

Don't try and burn the hand that feeds ya! :)

[2_much]

B sounds good.

Can you build mini sites with those target keywords, and send people to the order forms in your main site?

[Helpmebe1]

Hey 2 much,
Thanks for the reply.. you like B better? I just dont want to lose the term digital camera accessories, we have a good rank how it is.. My hands on tied with building the mini sites.. its a yahoo store.... cant get to fancy on this one...

[2_much]

But you wouldn't lose that term with B? In fact, you'd get it twice?

[WebRookie]

>>B)Digitalmans Digital Camera Accessories - we offer batteries, multi media cards and other accessories for your digital camera.

>>...without wrecking our key term digital camera supplies. What do you all think is best?

Choosing between both I'd choose B.

How about--

Digitalmans Digital Camera Accessories - we offer batteries, multi media cards, accessories and supplies for your digital camera.

Adds in the word supplies which keeps all terms from B and adds in the original phrase "digital camera supplies" twice.

[Helpmebe1]

Thanks everyone.. I used all your advice, racked my brain for a few hours condensing and coming up with more keywords and came up with I think the best descr. out of anyone in my cat (more then 500 sites) I submitted today.. well see what happens in a couple weeks... I was just afraid of diluting our main keyword phrase but being it is in the company name, (keeping fingers crossed) hopefully we wont loose our rank for it.

Thank you everyone!

[ckern]

Good luck with the description. Just submit one of them, Yahoo! will change it however they want to. Good luck, sometimes they are nice and give you a good one, sometimes they are harsh and give you something that is totally off the target you were hoping for. Good Luck.

[willtell]

Since every word is important, why waste space with 'we offer'? Of course your offer it or you wouldn't list it.

Why not say 'Complete line of', this gives more information in the same space.

[Helpmebe1]

ckern - Thank you! This editor seems cool, she didnt change the first one so hopefully shes just as cool this time around.
Junior Member


willtell- your absolutley right! Actually I dropped the we offer/ comeplete line all together and just listed some of the products and squeezed in some other keywords, it would of been to long with the we offer bit so I just dropped it all together.

Thanks....

CS

[ckern]

Glad I could be of input. Btw, there are many editors for each topic in Yahoo! It's not like ODP where there is only one. With Yahoo! its just whoever happens to open the email, and review it... Good luck.