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HONG KONG — Sept. 16, 2009 — Microsoft Corp. and M-Com today announced a solution offering that provides banks and payment processors with industry-leading mobile payments functionality — creating more opportunities for banks to offer mobile payments services to their customers and maximize their revenue opportunities. This solution clearly demonstrates that consumer choice and deployment flexibility for banks are key to the success of global mobile payments solutions for the financial services industry. The announcement was made at Sibos 2009, the industry’s premier global financial services forum.
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I rather think that press release was written by someone with little knowledge of the subject or little knowledge of "plain English". Does anyone know what a "solution offering" is?
In all matters technical, you should start by explaining the problem and then explain the solution.
Kaled.
