Is my link exchange e-mail too long?

[bobbonew]

Hey all, I have used this e-mail to get about 7 big sites to link to me. I just hope it's not too long. The info in it is 100% accurate. I have about 20 different categories on my site, and I target sites that are similar to the content in that category.

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Hi there,

I operate FOO.com which recently opened its doors in February. We are in the process of networking across the internet, and exchanging links with websites that are the quality of yours. We have a CATEGORY section on our website that we are trying to get exposure to.

Would it be possible for you to link to us on YOURWEBSITENAME? We are partnering with over 2,000 schools across America, Europe and Australia to offer our Q & A services to their students, and exposing your site to the largest demographic on the planet is not a bad thing.

As a good faith effort, I have gone ahead and already added your website on the actual CATEGORY category page. In addition to that, your link will show up randomly across every CATEGORY question that appears on our website.

I appreciate your time and consideration, best of luck with your website!

-MY NAME

FOO.com

[jackgordon]

No, i think it is a good length.
:)