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Which one is the best case for a slogan ?

         

bcc1234

1:55 pm on Aug 17, 2002 (gmt 0)

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Hi, which one do you guys think is the best way to spell a slogan ?

1) Find the perfect gift for any occasion

2) Find The Perfect Gift For Any Occasion

3) Find the Perfect Gift for any Occasion

4) Find the Perfect Gift for Any Occasion

Which one looks better ?

Thanks.

(tbear, thanks. I missed that)

[edited by: bcc1234 at 2:28 pm (utc) on Aug. 17, 2002]

tbear

2:01 pm on Aug 17, 2002 (gmt 0)

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3 + 4 appear to be the same......
I would go for 1 myself.

Mike_Mackin

2:07 pm on Aug 17, 2002 (gmt 0)

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Overture spells it "occasion"

And they show a pural in their tool FYI "special occasions"

bcc1234

2:31 pm on Aug 17, 2002 (gmt 0)

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Overture spells it "occasion"

And they show a pural in their tool FYI "special occasions"

It's going to be an image, so the wording from the SEO point of view is not important.

txbakers

2:58 pm on Aug 17, 2002 (gmt 0)

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How about "We have....

or just leave off "Find"

keep brainstorming...

bcc1234

3:25 pm on Aug 17, 2002 (gmt 0)

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How about "We have....

or just leave off "Find"

keep brainstorming...

I think "We have" would sound too straight-forward.

But any ideas are welcome.

Leaving out "Find" does sound interesting.

Thanks.

ukgimp

9:46 am on Aug 19, 2002 (gmt 0)

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Perfect Gifts For Any Occasion

Then you remove that almost useless "find"

ritch_b

9:49 am on Aug 19, 2002 (gmt 0)

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"Perfect Gifts For Any Occasion"

...gets my vote...

Sinner_G

9:57 am on Aug 19, 2002 (gmt 0)

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Leave off the 'find' and no capital letters.

Perfect gifts for any occasion

web_india

10:40 am on Aug 19, 2002 (gmt 0)

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Perfect gift for any occasion

Macguru

11:06 am on Aug 19, 2002 (gmt 0)

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Some smaller directories still use the alphabetical order to sort sites in categories. If some slogan is to appear in big letters on home page, some editors tend to pick it as site title. I always consider the alphabetical order as a important factor in slogans...

DaveN

11:20 am on Aug 19, 2002 (gmt 0)

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I read some marketing report that when people speed read or just glancing at headlines thier brain only reads the top half of the letters.

so :

Find The Perfect Gift For Any Occasion

is easy to read at a glance than[/b]

Find the perfect gift for any occasion

and really easier then
FIND THE PERFECT GIFT FOR ANY OCCASION
or
FiNd ThE pErFeCt gIfT fOr AnY oCcAsIoN

seeming how most headlines are just glanced at i would go for

Find The Perfect Gift For Any Occasion

DaveN

bcc1234

3:29 am on Aug 21, 2002 (gmt 0)

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Thanks guys.
Perfect Gifts For Any Occasion, it is :)

Marcia

4:07 am on Aug 21, 2002 (gmt 0)

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Find would not be useless for Jeeves if it's included somewhere in the text.

"where can I find the perfect gift?" :)

That's a good slogan! you can really play with words in content with that one, with different phrasing and changing the order of words for different exact phrases.

bcc1234

5:36 am on Aug 21, 2002 (gmt 0)

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Find would not be useless for Jeeves if it's included somewhere in the text.

It's going to be an image and will not be in the title or anywhere else on the page.