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I'm on the verge of drafting a single page document, brief and to the point statement that the company is under new management. It's bound to raise questions. I don't believe that's it prudent at this point to reveal the horrid details, or even allude to them, as I just did.
I would like to take the opportunity to explain our situation with regards to manufacturing and inventory. In a word its in the toilet, but salvagable. In other words, there are right and wrong ways to do things, and I want to give the right way a chance now that I can.
I thought about using this..
Ding Dong the Witch is Dead, and as soon as we sort out this mess we will contact you.
..doesn't sound right.. too 70's.
Any thoughts about how I might proceed?
The point I'm trying to convey is that mgmt has changed, and that we are going to try to mend our ways where we can. I'm just looking for the right words without running people away.
Soon after I posted the original message I saw a news item about a couple of top execs leaving a major corporation. Reading that a few times gave me some good insight.
If there are ways you feel we have lacked in the past please contact us and we will address them.
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never hope for anything, always be affirmative and positive
we are
we will
never leave any doubt
who knows, the above is just my own foolishness ;)
As a sign of confidence building I went with something similar to.. "New ownership and management have come together and we are working diligently..."
The biggest problem was how to make it clear that the previous owner is no longer around. That's a problem in that his name and the company name are synonomous in the minds of many of the customers. In the end I simply stated it as fact.
"<insert name> no longer represents <insert company> in any capacity."
I totally agree with not trying to sound hopeful or wishful. In my mind, either you do, or you don't, and that has little to do with wishing or hoping.
I guess I'm still being vague, at least here in the open forum. rocknbil, it is not I that's leaving, but rather I'm taking charge after someone else left rather... unexpectedly. But I still take your approach to heart. As mentioned earlier, I read a press release last night about two execs leaving a major corporation, and from that press release I was able to start drafting my own document.
Maybe I need a press agent.