title tag

[amythepoet]

My site is built with a content mangagement system

Now, let's say I sell personalized hardware

so for the title tag

may I put

Personalized Hammers, Screwdrivers, Widgets. Order here.

Or would it be better to say:

Hammers, Screwdrivers, Hardware, Order here.

thanks

[DrDoc]

What are you trying to emphasize? The hardware? That it's personalized? That you can order it?

[lucy24]

Does "personalized" mean that it's custom made, or that it's got your initials on it?

Either way you can leave off the "Here". You can pretty well count on the fingers of one hand* the number of situations where "here" in a title is necessary. (You are here. Where else would you be? :))


* 1. Linguistics site talking about demonstratives. 2. Religious site talking about the here and now. 3. Uh...?

[tangor]

The word "Fabulous" was left out "here" ... :)

lucy24 nails it... but I do have to ask is this content or keywords?

[amythepoet]

Yes, I want to emphasize that the hammers are personalized and that I sell them

personalized means that they are custom made.

[amythepoet]

and also personalized means that let's say the owner of the hammer has a story to go along with his hammer, so I incorporate that too

[amythepoet]

and this is for the title tag