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However I don't see how that is relevent to someone advising care when hiring a non-native speaker. It requires care, because someone for whom the language in which they write is not their primary one, even when they speak the second language extremely well, can easily produce grammatically correct but stilted, old-fashioned or non-colloquial writing. It's technically correct, but the tone or style is wrong.
The other question is Does my writing seem to be stilted, old-fashioned, and non-colloquial? English is not my mother tongue. But I should state that I have grown up studying in an American Institution. Again, insight would be greatly appreciated.
To me as a Brit, the example paragraph you gave says "American" and I would have said that even if you hadn't disclosed you studied at an American Institution.
An example of this hit home recently when I bought some books from Amazon. For some reason, they sent me versions printed for the US rather than for the UK. The language and spelling differences were quite surprising and annoying respectively, and the author's original British English had obviously been changed quite substantially to use American terms and spelling.
edited to add: I've just re-read your post, and it seems you didn't write the example paragraph, but whoever did also learned "American" English :)
I am assuming you mean they speak the language well from a grammatical point of view. Is that right?
Yes, that is what I meant.
may seem stilted, old-fashioned, and non-colloquial
May implies "or may not" and that was what I intended.
Anyone can produce poor or inappropriate writing, whether they are native speakers of a language or not. It's just a little bit more important if you are using a non-native speaker to be satisfied, in advance, that their style of writing, as well as its accuracy, is suited to the job.
I have grown up studying in an American Institution
This line of yours might be seen as being a little awkward since an institution can be used to refer to anything from a school to an insane asylum. The TV show 'Gunsmoke' is an American institution for example.
University or college might have been a more natural choice.
I don't think institution would be capitilized in the way you are using it either.
"I have grown up studying" seems a bit unnatural as well. "I grew up studying" might be better but it still makes it sound like you spent your entire childhood in some kind of institution.
And you probably meant a university in the U.S. as opposed to all of North America (Canada, Mexico), but that is getting really pedantic.
The other question is Does my writing seem to be stilted,
No need to capitalize 'Does' in this sentence.
I would also have to disagree with the relationship of 'speaking a language well' to 'being grammatically correct'. I tend to feel that most spoken language is not grammatically correct. In fact, generally when you write what someone has spoken it would tend to violate certain grammatical rules. Spoken language is generally more relaxed than written. (P.S., I am terrible at grammar. I tend to write to what 'sounds' right versus what is grammatically correct.)
I would also add that even written language varies based on the target audience. That is, a textbook/technical article would have a certain tone, and that would be different than a lifestyle article, business article, etc., etc.
Overall, you cannot tell the origin of a writer if they write well. Having seen examples of bad writing by non-native writers, it can sometimes be quite obvious - and of course, the classic example being 'All Your Base Are Belong to Us' ;)
Also, if you show examples of well-written articles to potential clients, your location and whether you are native to the language or not would tend to become irrevelant.
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