The rule as written will 'carry forward' the originally-requested query string. Is that what you want to do?
Again, what exactly is this rule meant to do? What is the (full) requested URI-path to be redirected, and what is the full URI to be redirected to?
"It will work" is only about 10% of the way to "It will work properly with no unintended side effects," and that is not good enough; For optimal results, nail down your requirements firmly before we start coding.