Zivush - 5:50 am on Jul 23, 2013 (gmt 0)
I think you shouldn't always use 'click here' for the link, but also other alternatives such as - read on, more readings, see here, more to read, [ any key phrase ], continue reading, etc etc.
As for the sentence -
Your main goal is to try being interesting enough so that it attracts the reader to click and continue reading.
I would always put a breath. Something that summarizes the main points in a good way.