Robert_Charlton - 6:51 pm on Dec 9, 2011 (gmt 0)
this makes me so sad, makes me realise we are living through the death of information.
To paraphrase Mark Twain, I think the reports of the death of information have been greatly exaggerated. More likely, the wholesale copying and spinning of information to create websites at the push of a button, or the constant avalanche of billions of pages of mindless drivel, would lead to the demise.
In any event, I don't think that 15 words of industry boilerplace would cause Pandalization. That said, I'd rewrite it.
I'd look carefully also to see whether the 15 words are symptomatic of a general cookie-cutter or paraphrased approach to the site content as a whole. That could well be a problem.