WebRookie - 5:48 pm on Apr 2, 2001 (gmt 0)

Really interesting stuff. Funny because the previous descriptions were written by a real writer (not me). Trying to tone down and edit some of the descriptions I use for submissions has been pretty interesting.

What is the "line" between descriptive and subtle sales spam? I've gotten bits of feedback and know some of the previous writing is considered too sales oriented.

I'm going to study some SERPS and see what the descriptions are like, my guess is our descriptions are a bit "dry".