Sgt_Kickaxe - 6:24 pm on Apr 20, 2010 (gmt 0)

we offer a personalized dashboard within Google Places that includes data about how many times people have found your business on Google

That should read "because of Google Places" not "on Google" since you won't find websites about those places very easily anymore. The search engine is becoming the content provider and it always gives itself top spot in serps on whatever it touches.

Other than that, I like it.