It's been my experience that you'll best serve yourself if you focus your clarifications on terminologies for the time being.
Make sure that what you are describing rings true across the Internet. Is that the same term used elsewhere in the same context?
What I mean is, you must ensure that the terms you use are valid/viable terms accurately describing what you wish to describe and will NOT be misconstrued as another term.
Clear up any of that ambiguety now, by defining your terms ( terminologies ) first. Remember, many of the terms you'll be using are situationally specific to the Internet and will need to be defined quite clearly.
Those experts you may encounter need to be on the same page as you. If they define the term differently than you do, the theme of your paper is going to be tough to follow, much less write.
It's my thoughts that once ALL the terms are defined ( and properly researched for citational purposes ), then almost any reasonable academic ( even though lacking in specific knowledge ) should still be able to make enough sense of your paper to assist you with any corrections and or flow/theme etc.
Once you're paper has passed this muster, then I'd suggest someone within the field look it over...if you can find someone who can critique your paper objectively.